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Nuclear Dreams
Contributed by
ophelia
on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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shadows past the midnight mast
dancing dragons on the ceiling
her battered soul slowly healing
fires burning from within
scorching burning all her skin
crazy laughter off the walls
seductively across the bed she crawls
what secrets does she behold?
In her mind she's spun of gold
can you handle all she brings
what happens when she sheds you of your angel wings
She plans w/ the devil, can't be controlled
her heart is whole & full of love but it's cold
Dance with me around the ring of the world
let loose be free w/ love unfurled
close your eyes hold onto the air
we'll soar thru GOD's domain without a care
can you live in her nuclear dream
Will you know reality from what it may seem?
Copyright ©
ophelia
... [
2002-12-11 17:00:00]
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Re: Nuclear Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 07:48:40 PM AEST
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Hey, this was a very interesting, intriguing, well-written poem. i loved the rhyme scheme very captivating although I dont understand why its called nuclear dreams? Keep up the poems!
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Re: Nuclear Dreams
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:19:00 PM AEST
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| Freaky but good... nice write! |
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Re: Nuclear Dreams
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:10:58 PM AEST
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| I like your poem but I'm sorta confused. It was nicely written though. |
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