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Let Me Die
Contributed by
redtempest13
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In the abyss,
I fall alone,
I will die,
On my own.
Don’t save me,
This reason why:
I want peace,
So let me die.
I have no reason,
To live this life,
Too much pain,
Too much strife.
Too many problems,
I want no more,
So let me die,
Close the door.
I’ll cut my wrists,
With death be one,
My blood seeped out,
Now ‘tis done.
Now I’m dead,
But I am sad,
There is no peace,
Just all bad.
It was wrong,
To let me die,
It got me nowhere,
Here is why:
This I knew,
Suicide’s a sin,
I did it anyway,
What’s done has been.
Now forever,
Not so well,
Thanks to this,
I’ll stay in Hell.
Copyright ©
redtempest13
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2005-02-11 15:11:29]
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Re: Let Me Die
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by Mesano on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:18:53 PM AEST
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awesome poem.. reminds me of the sort i would write.. keep up the good work
-Nicki |
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Re: Let Me Die
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:19:29 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem great wright i hope i see more of this exelence written so well |
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Re: Let Me Die
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by Kazzy1231 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 05:55:12 AM AEST
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| Intresting poem,I like it though. |
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