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still have you
Contributed by
dixiegirl
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:16:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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my thoughts are an endless parade of saddness as i sit here beside your headstone
endlessly gazing at your name carved so deep
passing my hands over the cold hard gorund where you so peacefully sleep
kissing your name as if it were your libs i fell you looking down on me from heaven so far away
so now my thoughts are no longer of a saddness but of a knowing a knowing that i still have you and the matter how long i must walk this empty road
i still have you by my side every step of the way
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2005-02-11 14:16:23]
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Re: still have you
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:27:09 PM AEST
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| awwthis is a deeply emotional poem one of exelence i am so glad you posted it you are really great at expressing deep emotions |
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Re: still have you
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by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:40:54 PM AEST
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| The only thing I would suggest is make your stanza's far more stood out..It is a good write and the feeling here was very strong..Good first post.. |
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Re: still have you
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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| well you impressed me,good write for your first post,don't mind the haters,contiue to speak from your heart |
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