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Not Your Average Girl
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am not your average girl,
I don’t walk about without a care in the world,
I am not all sugar & spice,
I am not made from all things nice.
I am made from bugs & snails,
In my heart I carry a hundred nails,
I throw them out when I feel threatened,
As by the darkness I am deafened.
I don’t pretend to like people who I hate,
I don’t force smiles as I don’t always feel great,
I live in a world where hurt & pain reside,
My feelings are open I don’t try to hide.
Love is something I have but yet destroy,
I before have treated Mark’s heart like a toy,
Forgetting about his needs harping on about mine,
I have hurt his heart that much it has lost its shine.
I do not follow others I go it alone,
I know I am the reaper of the seeds I have sown,
I know about everything that I can possibly be,
Most of the time I am my own worst enemy.
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pixie
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:18:13 PM AEST
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| mY DEAR Pixie you are far from just a avergae girl..Your talent told me that long ago..Never feel you have nothing to offer..Misery comes in seasons..But it also ends as well..As all seasons do.. |
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:36:42 PM AEST
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Hey pixie. This was a good emotional right. (Listen, I probably shouldn't say this, but holding it all in doesn't help either.) "In my heart I carry a hundred nails,
I throw them out when I feel threatened," sure is a line I can identify with. Hugs! |
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:19:17 PM AEST
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I know what you mean, i can so realate to this one. The last stanza was perfect beyond words. Good writing as always.
Jane x
P.S. Sorry if i haven't followed up with your poems LOL. |
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:37:23 AM AEST
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the poem? stunning as usual, the contex of
what your saying? nah, i ain't bying it, sweet
as lilacs in may . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:32:01 PM AEST
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Great poem. I hope things get better for you.
Scott |
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Re: Not Your Average Girl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 01:10:33 AM AEST
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I think we may all be our own worst enemies but I especially like because I can relate so well to this line: I do not follow others I go it alone
Really like the honesty in this poem. Niceley done.
Tim |
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