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Lonely Girl
Contributed by
juw
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 01:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lonely Girl
Leaning over the bridge
Looking down at the dark waters
So quiet, so still, so lonely
A reflection of her heart
The pain, the sadness, the memories
all came rushing back
Too much for her heart to bear
Wanting to forget
Deciding wether to jump
Thinking about it one last time
Staring down at the loneliness
Remembering her mother
Her sacrifices, her words,
Her never ending love
She walked away again
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2005-02-11 13:52:43]
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:01:59 PM AEST
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| i love this poem you are very talented na exelent write |
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by thecutter on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:55:32 AM AEST
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lovely poem, gets straight to the point.
The one person stopping me from going all the way at the moment is my mother,i couldnt hurt her like that. so i know how u feel. keep ure head up and keep fighting. |
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