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Inkline Weaver
Contributed by
zaknafein8891
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 11:48:04 AM in AEST
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As burning dim lit candle
sinks, hands on paper loom;
weavers think. With inkline thread
in hand, weave world, and
worlds beyond, in reader's
head with ink.
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2005-02-11 11:48:04]
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Re: Inkline Weaver
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by arden on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:09:36 PM AEST
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interesting
rather hard to form an opinion on this. though i noticed if you read it out loud its bit of a tongue twister lol
anyways. its short and different.
i like it, alot.
well done.
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Re: Inkline Weaver
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by CrystalTigerBloodrose on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:49:59 PM AEST
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HA, I actually get this one! And you told me I was dumb. XP Well back at you. ^^ Jk. You know I love you.
Anyway, in analyzing this:
The hands are on their loom, the paper, and the weaver is the writer. The inkline thread is the pen and with this and the 'loom,' the writer creates fantasy worlds within the page(s) of his or her writing, and when someone reads it they become part of that world, if only for a brief moment, or only in imagination.
Take that! XD
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Re: Inkline Weaver
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by Aeturos on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 04:53:44 PM AEST
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| I love it. (: Very good concept, I like the wordplay and odd repetition. |
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