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Taken
Contributed by
bruised_angel
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:13:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The alley was damp
The jagged stone ripped her flesh
Her eyes focused on the flickering lamp
As his powerful hands tore her dress.
The flickering light had died
He left, She laid still
She hadnt screamed, now she silently cried
with laddered tights, she lays in pieces
At the party, he wasnt the best flirt
So she encouraged him
Not knowing his touch would make her feel like dirt
He had said she would be safe.
But she wasnt safe, he had lied
not even nine months later
As his baby was born
She had died
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2005-02-11 05:13:46]
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Re: Taken
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by summers on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:17:21 AM AEST
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| awesome imagery. good job. i look forward to more. |
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Re: Taken
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:36:12 AM AEST
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| wow... this is awesome |
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