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2:03am
Contributed by
summers
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:07:34 AM in AEST
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to be honest with you
there’s nothing you can say that hasn’t been said a million times before.
every line has been written;
every idea, formed.
so, i accept inevitability,
yet when i get enough alcohol in my system,
i look for loopholes. i look for exits.
it’s useless, however…
a pathetic attempt to assemble a fashion all my own.
originality is stolen.
so i clutch Bukowski to my chest, pour some more vodka, and try to fall asleep.
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summers
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2005-02-11 03:07:34]
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Re: 2:03am
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:18:37 AM AEST
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yours is a sad way of life to drink to and be in misery.I really feel for you.
take care |
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Re: 2:03am
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by summers on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:20:21 AM AEST
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| i really dont drink as much as it seems...but thanks for the comment :) |
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Re: 2:03am
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:29:11 AM AEST
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| Inspiration in the wee hours of the morning...I sort of imagine this as a still-life picture somehow...anyhow, I liked it all the same, though if you went through life like this all the time, I'd be quite sad for ya. |
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Re: 2:03am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:42:35 PM AEST
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This was a nice strong write - honest and full.
thanks for that. |
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Re: 2:03am
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:25:26 AM AEST
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| I love this. It's such a powerful write, and I can really relate to it, except I soothe my wounds with wine instead of vodka. Amazing job. Five stars from me. |
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