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Purified
Contributed by
sleeplessmind
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Purified?
Meaning pure. Free of dyes and additives.
Little bottle of water sitting upon my desk.
Across my lips and around my tongue, in the belly is where you rest.
I take you with me on my walk, to lunch and in the car.
I sip you at the office, at home, and the bars.
The waitress asks what to drink and water comes out fast,
Because I know when I take that sip, the pleasure will forever last.
So.......
Little bottle of water I am shocked to find out you are waste!
ingredients.... magnesium sulfate, potassium chloride, and salt added for taste!
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sleeplessmind
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2005-02-11 02:57:26]
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Re: Purified
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:06:59 AM AEST
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Really? They add salt and stuff to bottled water? I've never noticed that! hmmmf.
By the way, welcome to YPDC, sleeplessmind!
~SNM~ |
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Re: Purified
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:21:12 AM AEST
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| Ahaa...was feeling thirsty throughout the poem until I read the last two lines, lol. Good job, and welcome to YPDC. :) |
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Re: Purified
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by candysears on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 06:13:47 PM AEST
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Very good...
God Bless |
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