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Malevolent Sleep
Contributed by
abrahamt
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Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Moonlight flows over peaceful trees
Moonbeams sail on a lilting breeze
The landscape's painted in shades of night
Darkness reigns, having ursurped the light
A dark voice rises, a dirge it sings
Wafted abroad by dim night wings
Shadows march and nightmares ride
Dreams on horseback slither and gilde
Unyielding sleep holds its tethers tight
Coveted morning, nowhere in sight
Toiling, laboring, through gelatinous air
Then falling, falling, hopeless despair
Consciousness crashing back into being
Tranquility returning, horrors fleeing
A cloak of silence lightly descends
A soothing peace to the mind it lends
The stillness lulls, slumber it brings
And darkness, laughing, spreads its wings
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2002-12-11 09:30:00]
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 04:48:59 PM AEST
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| wow...i just love the last line...wow... |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by cryingonmyporch on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:41:38 PM AEST
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I loved it very much! I do hope to read more poems from you!
Always
Amy |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:19:43 AM AEST
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beautiful work
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by abrahamt on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 02:30:55 AM AEST
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Thanks Amy! That encourages me to post more - this is the first time Ive submitted my poetry for feedback. Hope you like my next one too! And I hope you are not as sad and lonely as your nickname seems to indicate...my next poem shall be a more cheerful one so let me know if it makes you feel better.
Rgds,
Abe |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by Delusions on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 04:47:46 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this one... keep it up ~Delusions~ |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by angelrae on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:18:05 AM AEST
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| A most beautiful poem. I loved reading it. It is something I relate too, thank you for sharing. Hope to see more of your work on this site. |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by Icequeen on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:34:20 AM AEST
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| Excellent. Love it. Great imagery. |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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| wOw! This is gorgeous.... awesome write! |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 06:15:19 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. Nice images. |
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Re: Malevolent Sleep
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by nikkie on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:35:05 AM AEST
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| WOW! I like how it all comes together! I wish my poems were awsome like this one!! always Nikkie |
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