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Still With Me

Contributed by Tobe on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:03:55 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Even though I know you are gone
As hard as it may seem to believe
You taught me right from wrong
And I believe you are still with me

I know pain is something that time cannot erase
And love is something that can never be replaced
These are emotions that keep haunting my mind
Every time I think of your unholy demise

With all the ***** going on in the world today
I don't feel like there is much I can do
But I know when I see your face
You are the one that guides me through

Even though I know you are gone
As hard as it may seem to believe
You taught me right from wrong
And I believe you are still with me

I'm starting to think about what I should become
While listening to music and cranking it up loud
I'm not going to live life feeling like I always have to run
I hope to make the right choices and make you proud

You are the one who gave me power
To get me through when others wanted to devour
And even when I felt like ending my life
You are the one who showed me the light

Even though I know you are gone
As hard as it may seem to believe
You taught me right from wrong
And I believe you are still with me

Everyone who really knew you
Knew that you were a great person
Those who never had a clue
Never had the right to make assertions

The memories I have of you can never be taken away
They will remain here until I am forsaken, end of days
This is why I will never give in
Cause my strength is building from within

Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-11 00:03:55]
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Re: Still With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:41:35 AM AEST
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wow, just amazing. touched home with me...my girlfriend's papa recently passed away as well. great write, all the emotion just flowing from within. keep it up, great job
the raven

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