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Contributed by LaDyD on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

From the first day
you were something else,
You made me fall in love
but it was all false.
You said you wouldn't
break my heart,
but you did
leaving me apart.
I thought we were
perfect for each other,
you said things
were just getting tougher.
Now we are over
but not to me,
I still love you
that’s all I want you to see.

Copyright Â© LaDyD ... [ 2005-02-10 23:58:49]
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Re: ....First... (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:04:02 AM AEST
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This is a pretty good first write, I like the shortness...My first poem I wrote Is/was super freaking long...But this is'nt that bad..
good job :)

Clark

Re: ....First... (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 01:22:01 AM AEST
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You got a good start, keep it up

Re: ....First... (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:07:15 AM AEST
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I thought you don't have talent? What happened to that? LIAR!! Anyway, I think this was an excellent first write...heartfelt, no spelling errors, short and to the point. Did you mean everything you wrote? Even though this poem makes me feel happy and sad, I enjoyed reading it. You should definitely keep writing because I can't wait to read more! muah TD

Re: ....First... (User Rating: 1 )
by One on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:05:54 PM AEST
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I love your simplicity, its very endearing

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