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Dont tell me!
Contributed by
_smelly_oranges_
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Dont tell me that you love me
Dont tell me that you care
Dont tell me when im hurting
Youll be the first to be there
At first you gave me happiness
But now all i feel is pain
In the beginning i felt loved
But now its no longer the same
Im not sure if its another girl
Or your just caught up in your games
You know ill always love you
You cant deny its true
The only time im happy
Is when im in the arms of you
But lately its been so different
I feel your love has changed
We used to be so happy
But now its not the same
While you stay out late
I sit home and cry . . .
Praying to God and asking,"WHY?!"
Why does the love of my life
want to hurt me?
Is this going to go on
for the rest of our lives?
Ive given you my heart
Ive given you all i can
Now its time to walk the walk
God damn it, be a man!
You know ill always love you
But now its time to choose
Are we just high school sweet hearts?
Or are we forever, me and you?
Will our relationship restore its love?
Cause baby, no matter what . . .
I choose US!
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_smelly_oranges_
... [
2005-02-10 23:25:32]
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Re: Dont tell me!
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:39:05 PM AEST
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I really didnt see the ending coming, thought it would be more of a break from him...
Great poem..:)
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Re: Dont tell me!
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by Crimson_Valley on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:40:30 PM AEST
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| Oh my heck you are such a good poet! I move than love this poem!!! 10 thumbs up! |
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Re: Dont tell me!
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:40:43 PM AEST
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| i personally loved it..my favorite lines :"god damn it, be a man" much love to ya keep up the good work |
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Re: Dont tell me!
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:54:29 AM AEST
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I love the flow. You GO GIRL!:P hehe
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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