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Anymore
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Mary had a broken life
A broken life
Only a few could understand
Mary had an unspoken strife
An unspoken strife
Only a few could withstand
Mary lead a prison life
A prison life
...
She was raped by a man
...
She could'nt take it anymore
So I took his life
With my bare hands
I ended the hurt
In her core
I took his life
Because she could'nt
Take it...
Anymore...
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ForeverAlone
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2005-02-10 23:04:54]
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Re: Anymore
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:10:37 PM AEST
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| something is terribly brilliant in this poem, i think its the fact you wrote it, and the way you did it. |
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Re: Anymore
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by _smelly_oranges_ on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:34:09 PM AEST
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this is pretty good
it deserves more comments
Orange (lol) |
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Re: Anymore
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by sojourner on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:50:05 AM AEST
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a very poignant poem,it shows the nature of the beast, within us all.
sojourner, |
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Re: Anymore
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:45:03 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Anymore
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by heartbroken4ever on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:17:16 PM AEST
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Thanks for saving me clark
I love you
Love Always
Amber |
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Re: Anymore
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:52:35 PM AEST
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This is very well written, very romantic in a sense. Wonderful write. Very beautiful.
--amanda-- |
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