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One Light
Contributed by
AzurePaladin
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Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A wax candle and a wax candle
Both unaware.
Glowing,
Wind and rain
And floods and wind and rain,
And rain.
Flames flickering fighting failing,
Loss, wax droplets.
Darkness, smoke rising, deepening darkness.
Mere chance, fate.
Awareness.
Hope, a spark
A slowly flickering trembling flame.
And then two flames.
Brighter, growing
Feeding from the other.
Suddenly impervious
Brighter, growing.
Feeding.
Finally light and sense.
Droplets melted away,
Ever brighter.
Two wax candles, two flames,
One light.
Copyright ©
AzurePaladin
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2002-12-11 09:00:00]
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Re: One Light
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by Jessica_Saini on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:58:42 AM AEST
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| Nice write! |
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Re: One Light
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:50:25 AM AEST
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| lovely poem :*) |
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Re: One Light
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:52:37 AM AEST
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Always brings a smile to my face! I love you so much, Erin! :*
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Re: One Light
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by Eloise on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:31:58 PM AEST
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| what an awesome poem... |
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Re: One Light
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 10:53:44 PM AEST
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Great job! I love your imagery. and the alliteration and repetition, both old ornaments usually forgotten nowadays. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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