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Trapped
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She looks around,
A craze in her eyes.
Why is she here?
She doesn't know why.
Four white washed walls,
closing her in.
What crime has she committed?
What sin has she sinned?
White straps bind her,
Down to the bed.
Something approaches,
As does her dread.
Through an unseen door,
A figure comes.
She shivers slightly,
Then goes numb.
Her skin becomes clammy,
As the room goes cold.
Terror grips her,
Taking hold.
To close her eyes,
Or face her foe?
Is it her enemy?
How can she know?
Then it is over,
The figure steps out.
And all at once,
She's filled with doubt.
Poised over her,
Holding a knife.
Is.....herself,
To take her own life.
[...Trapped in her own nightmare...]
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Re: Trapped
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:47:08 PM AEST
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| two words.......LOVED IT!!! Heck I reckon that was one of the best things i happen to read today. that was pretty dang good |
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Re: Trapped
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:47:21 AM AEST
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wow very graphic write.
your write paint a picture like no other.
well done. |
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Re: Trapped
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:55:00 AM AEST
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| Freaky and excellent write, full on details, achieving true realism |
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