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Stars Separate Us
Contributed by
waos
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:41:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Stars crowned us, alone
beneath the endless expanse of glitter
waiting to fall on our upturned faces;
waiting for the moment,
the connection.
Stars crashed around us,
I pulled them down upon our shoulders -
festering craters ate away time,
keeping me from you -
I couldn't get to you.
Stars are my memories
beneath the overhanging trees
and against the chipping yellow paint;
shining in the darkness draped opon us,
an unquenchable, unremovable entity of itself.
Stars are the feelings;
beneath the same sky -
yet never in the same view.
Nestled in our separate spaces
I search in vain for you.
Stars are the watchmen,
illuminating foggy breath
from whispered desires and fears -
comforting in distance and stability -
holding all the pain thrown their way.
Stars are the only hope left,
like a whispering whistle on the air
eloquently simple requests rest -
trying in vain to make life fair,
trying in vain not to fall and fail.
Stars crowned us just to crash
in a tide of memory,
of feeling;
watching hope alone,
refusing to fade away.
~Waos - for the memories we made
Copyright ©
waos
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2005-02-10 22:41:13]
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:38:22 AM AEST
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| very awsome write. |
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:51:37 AM AEST
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"Stars are the watchmen,
illuminating foggy breath
from whispered desires and fears -
comforting in distance and stability -
holding all the pain thrown their way."
Sterling work. |
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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god Kara this was so beautiful and deep and
sad. You just opened yourself up with such
honesty and it almost hurt to read it. Seriously
a great poem Kara... set your sights HIGH
instead of low this poem is just one example
of why you should.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:19:42 PM AEST
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| this is so powerful and written well that its purely amazing. |
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:38:38 AM AEST
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Wow this is a heavenly beautifull write. It's almost as beautifull as the stars themselves.
A masterpeice.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Stars Separate Us
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
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Stars are the feelings;
beneath the same sky -
yet never in the same view.
Nestled in our separate spaces
I search in vain for you.
Beautiful. |
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