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So Stressed...
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:50:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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So stressed
She showered and dressed
everyday and the next
All the time blurred together
Nonstop
So stressed
Nonstop
drama with no rest
She tried & tried
every way and at night
All the time blurred together
Nonstop
So stressed
Nonstop
life is a beautiful mess
She smoked & choked
every feeling intense and provoked
All the time blurred together
Nonstop
So stressed
Nonstop
The pain was never any less
She tried & tried
every day and sometimes
All the time blurs together
Nonstop
So stressed
Nonstop
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Re: So Stressed...
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:07:46 PM AEST
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| Good write..Perhaps you should allow the stress in your life to just breathe out..It is your life right..Stress has no hold but that which we allow it.. |
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Re: So Stressed...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:00:36 AM AEST
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Stressful, in reading. It conveys your stress to me, and I believe that this has already relieved it in some measure.
Well expressed. |
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Re: So Stressed...
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:31:32 AM AEST
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Yes, a good write, and that feeling can feel like it goes on and will go on forever, but it won't. Hang in there, and keep writing.
Saying a prayer for you.
Stitch |
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Re: So Stressed...
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:33:33 AM AEST
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| very effective repetition, sort of made me read it faster. conveyed your stress well! |
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