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Suffocated from Breathing
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:09:30 PM in AEST
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Suffocated from Breathing
You see the bubbles
Rise to the surface
Filled with carbon monoxide
As poison takes life
I believed all the fables
That I had a purpose
To fulfill before I die
But I was a failure every time
I was so used to labels
That I couldn't erase
Since truth isn't in lies
To be seen with eyes
But the bubbles
Are the last trace
Of ever living this life
Because all of the whys
Suffocated without purpose
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-10 20:09:30]
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:12:26 PM AEST
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| I was hoping for more of a violent feel however perhaps that is just my fetish..Anyhow what can I say kitten..Once more you kick most of the members ass here..Good girl..Great poem..Perfect poet.. |
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:15:04 PM AEST
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I liked this Jinnifer... Different then usual
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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| very good Jennifer, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:39:11 PM AEST
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| I guess I'm still believing the lies - trying to find out my reason for being here. Anyway, I like the way you expressed the emotion of slowly getting your airways drowned. Short bit *very* to the point. Powerful write, as usual. Blessings. |
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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Dark, powerful write. Gasping for air as I read it.
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Re: Suffocated from Breathing
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:51:18 AM AEST
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| so much sadness, deep words, excellent poem |
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