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Weeping Willow
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:03:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel just like a weeping willow,
As tears gently roll down my pillow,
They fall onto my soft bed covers,
I long to feel the arms of my lover.
I envy the lovely beautiful rose,
I remember when I was one of those,
But as heartache set in my petals fell,
My lovely flower lost its heavenly smell.
I stand with my head hung in the soil,
Thinking of the love that I did spoil,
Why couldn’t I love, why didn’t I trust?
It was my own fault my relationships gone bust.
My petals were once so vibrant & red,
Now they are brown & a long time dead,
They hang down over my face,
Suspended alone in an unhappy place.
I can remember the smiles, the happiness,
But I’ve been suffocated by the hurt & the stress,
The tears won’t ever stop falling,
But to my heart you have stopped calling.
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:09:05 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie ... that one hurts ... I can feel that all the way over here. You certainly know how express the feeling, and fear of aloneness. And you do so very well.
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:15:01 PM AEST
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| You never have to prove yourself to anyone..Not when it comes to your talent here..I really love all your feeling you put into your writes..This is no exception at all.. |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:19:02 PM AEST
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| awwww pixilator.... |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:44:41 PM AEST
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this tells of love as as sadly as one could tell about it, and just as beautiful pix, another one one 4 the art gallery . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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| beautifully sad, pixie - i just hate that i can relate, to the love lost never going back sort of feeling. tiffany j. |
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Re: Weeping Willow
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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Well the feelings were well writen, powerful emotions are always strong in your poetry. A griping sad write Kriss.
Jane x |
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