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When You Feel Close to Him
Contributed by
quiet_no_friends_girl
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:20:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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nature around me, wind blowing through my hair,
through the wind I feel you,
a rounded arm, scooping me up to cuddle,
to tell me how much you love me,
to make everything okay,
I feel you burush your hand upon my cheek,
in the fury of the wind,
your soft touch so evident,
I'm num with cold on the outside,
but the inside of me so warm,
full of your unselfish love,
and I want to stay outside forever,
to feel so close to you,
for all of my life,
to talk to you, to feel you,
hear your anwser swaying with the wind,
and feel my tears and yours falling down fromt the sky in the rain,
I love the feeling of being so loved by you,
There is no feeling as great,
as feeling so close to you.
I wrote this because I feel this way on windy, rainy days when I take walks alone and nobody understands why I always want to take walks alone and this is the best explanation for them, though I haven't let anyone read it. . I'm a depressed teen, I'm independent and even though I love my non-abusive, both loving average parents, and two younger brothers I wish I could see them for 2 hours a day and that's it. I always like to be alone and independent. I don't like doing things with friends and parents around. I don't have any real friends right now. Nobody disses me at school and I'm accepted by everyone I've got all the abercrombie, aeropostle, american eagle stuff, but I'm just all alone.
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Re: When You Feel Close to Him
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:31:10 PM AEST
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| such heartfelt emotion here, and a great inspiration. You've catptured your feelings and thoughts well here, all while keeping a good wod flow going. Nicly done. |
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Re: When You Feel Close to Him
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:51:13 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. I really enjoyed reading this and I look forward to reading more from you. |
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