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What You've Done
Contributed by
allforyou
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:07:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I don't want your help today,
because you left us all.
Don't know how you could say,
that it was all my fault.
You,
You're the one to blame,
you caused all of my hate.
How could you take,
all that I had left to hold on to.
You gave up, I'm ashamed of you.
And everyone can see,
what you've done to me.
Why can't I get this feeling,
back that you took from me.
I just can't handle dealing,
with all the memories.
Love,
Love is what I see,
but pain is what I feel.
I just cannot deal,
with this lonliness inside of me.
It's like a game of hide and seek.
And I am on my own,
I'll walk myself home.
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allforyou
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2005-02-10 18:07:16]
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Re: What You've Done
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by freckle on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:47:11 PM AEST
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| Good write, filled with a lot of raw emotion. Really good. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: What You've Done
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:17:37 PM AEST
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| brilliance was written. |
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