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Untitled
Contributed by
weepingwillow
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love doesn’t come for those who wait
It doesn’t come for those who take
Love doesn’t come to those who seek
It doesn’t come to the weak
Love comes to the blessed
To those with more than those with less
Love comes to few and far between
For the rest love is never green
To those, love is a seed that never emerged
A flower that never bloomed
To those, love is a one-way street
Where love they never meet
Love is cruel and unkind
But how I wish that love were mine
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weepingwillow
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2005-02-10 17:48:32]
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Re: Untitled
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:56:20 PM AEST
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| My comment to you is..Look for a title always..Untitled poems are to vauge, and to be honest will never speak the true feeling of the write..oTHER then that this is very good..I did enjoy it.. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:05:27 PM AEST
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| Oh man, I hear ya! |
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Re: Untitled
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by fenris on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:32:10 AM AEST
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| great poem... but afterdark is right... you need a title for this one... |
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