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Don't Bother
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:17:26 PM in AEST
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It matters not that I hurt too
It's always been, and will be about you
You hear only what will prove your cause
Ignoring facts that show your flaws
You speak of love, demand respect
Tell me ... is it my turn yet ?
Touch with claws and hardened nails
Point out where my softness fails
Speak in anger, sharp attack
Act surprised when I bite back
See the world through tinted shade
Then wonder why emotions fade
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Nazmythian
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Re: Don't Bother
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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*hugs tightest ever*
Oh hun...wow, this is angry..
I hope you are OK.
Stunning write, your feelings show well.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:31:26 PM AEST
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| wow. i just.... wow. wonderful display of emotion. |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:42:51 PM AEST
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| This is true it is alwyas about me..and I am sorry..I love you naz.. you could never bite..only growl really deep and sexy..but if you did bite..where would it be? |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:22:08 PM AEST
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Ooooh, grrrrr! Wow, Nazzy! Never seen you like this before... I do hope it passes, cheri... I hate to see you in pain or any other mood other than happy. :*( Feel better, douce Scott! Huggles, sympathies and love! Excellent vent! Intense, like your "Guardians of the Gate." Beautiful and brutally honest. Loved them! All my love, honey! Forever,
Steph. |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:18:42 PM AEST
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Another emotional write. If you need an ear...
"Speak in anger, sharp attack" I try not to, but if I'm ticked off it's never good news no matter how I try to soften it - even if I'm not that angry I guess.
You write some powerful stuff when you're ticked off!
Blessings...
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Re: Don't Bother
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:26:18 PM AEST
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angrs better out than in hunni *hugs* me always here for you if and when you want me ok? good expression of deep feelings
your pix xx |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:21:21 PM AEST
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This reminds me... of where I was a while back. Somewhere - buried - I have a write or two like this. Almost... exactly like this.
Well expressed, Nazzy. There is more here than words, of course - but the words are rather impactful for being so precise.
Time. - it's the only thing that saved me from this. May it be kind to you in the same (quicker in coming though!) way-
~SNM~ |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:21:26 PM AEST
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Can't remember seeing something like this
from you.
More one of those emotional response poems,
but you still tell a story in this shorter poem
from you.
A tale of a double standard...
"then wonder why emotions fade"
--Ghosty |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:19:35 PM AEST
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| this mood paid off very well poetically. |
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Re: Don't Bother
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:49:18 AM AEST
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Naz, this poem represents a classic example of dealing with someone who blames, and does not take responsibility for their part in any problems. This would make most anyone angry!
Excellant write... really expresses frustration well.
Willofree,
Terry |
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