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Crimson Addiction
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Nothing can stop me now,
As I drag the hungry blade across sweet flesh...
It's been pleading for months and a day,
There, inside my last drawer on the left...
A muffled cry of recklessness,
And I finally give in...
"NO! You can't start that again!!"
Oh, but how I yearn to...
It’s been so long since I succumbed to my addiction,
Of blades and blood…
Ah, that feeling of release that writing cannot fulfill,
A fleeting sting of pain, then it’s all pleasure…
Such beauty,
The way it would travel along the length of my arm,
Ending in a pool of scarlet confined emotions…
This despair is consuming me,
Chewing and spitting me back out…
These memories are drowning me,
And I just want it all to end…
Just want it all to disappear,
Drain out of these veins,
And leave only a crimson legacy…
This depression will never end…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-02-10 16:27:47]
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:56:11 PM AEST
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| Oh Fleur..I thought I was either going to get to spend my quarter or read about chocolate..rotflmao.. seriously..I loved this.. PM me soul sister..we have a lot to talk about..:-/ |
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:01:00 PM AEST
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| You do dark so well......very well . |
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:26:06 PM AEST
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| it's been so long... this poem is really deep, i love it. |
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:33:58 PM AEST
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Wow you've taken me back in time to a place
I hope to never go back to. You have written
down these feelings and images and crafted
it into an amazing poem. I think you have a
new fan here. Stay strong and keep up the
writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:50:19 PM AEST
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no greater addiction than love how vivid this
peice of writting, so tragic and beautiful at the
same time, u r a poet devine . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Crimson Addiction
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:26:04 PM AEST
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| written with excellence from a poet of talent. |
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