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Dwelling in self pity.
Contributed by
wolfman
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:20:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dwelling in self pity
What am I doing? Why am I here?
Is there no reason I cried every last tear?
I want to be happy I want to know
If this, my life, is as far as it will go
It is destructive not knowing your purpose
Just going through life thinking you’re worthless
I have many friends many I do not know
But to them I just can’t go
For if they knew what I do
Then surley my life would be through
From the outside it doesn’t seem so bad
But it's unbearable the life I’ve had
So much of life I haven’t had that it seem real
All I want is to again have love to feel
I’m sure that this will all pass on
And this pity I have will then be gone
My sorrows will leave and be no more
And this pain goes and makes others feel poor
But tell then in these thoughts I will cry
Tell another session with my psychiatrist I can buy.
“Yes, can I speak to Dr. Capelin?”
Speaking he says
“When is your earliest opening…”?
Copyright ©
wolfman
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:43:56 PM AEST
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I think we all know self doubt. We all wonder what are lives are about. Asking the questions is what the quest of life is for. Finding the answers... Well, I think only a few attain this level. All we can do is enjoy the quest.
Good Write.
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:05:56 PM AEST
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| good write wolfie..at least your shrink will see you..mine puts me on hold.. or tells me how many pills it takes to O.D...LOL |
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:47:35 PM AEST
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you opened up your deepest wounds and
exposed them for all to see that alone is
worthy of my respect. Not only was this
honest, but it was equisitely written I loved the
flow of it.
"I’m sure that this will all pass on
And this pity I have will then be gone
My sorrows will leave and be no more"
I loved those three lines because they show
that you still have hope which is important.
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:13:22 PM AEST
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I’m sure that this will all pass on
And this pity I have will then be gone
My sorrows will leave and be no more
This is true. I love those lines! Gives hope. And hope be with you. I hope things get better for you. Very great poem and heart felt.
Scott |
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by noone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:26:24 PM AEST
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Great write! We can all feel like this at times i think. I loved the flow of this poem,i could relate to it extremely well. Remember there is always light at the end of the tunnel.
Kirsty x |
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:20:13 PM AEST
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Ahh yes. More of this (no longer mysterious) Capelin fellow. As others have said, this piece hath a good flow. And is honest. Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:23:06 PM AEST
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a very expressionistic piece of writing - i felt that youu really conveyed your message here with lines like 'But tell then in these thoughts I will cry
Tell another session with my psychiatrist I can buy.' - really expressive stuff. excellent.
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Re: Dwelling in self pity.
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:37:29 PM AEST
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"All I want is to again have love to feel"
True. The cry of most human hearts. I guess that some just cry louder then others..
Take care, my friend.
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