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Mask of Deception
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:34:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The mask of deception,
Forever adhered to your face...
All a lie,
The image you portrayed for me,
The love that you proclaimed,
The father that you thought you were...
And here we are again,
Doing the same dance over and over,
Cat chases mouse, mouse chases cat...
An ever-changing cycle,
But it all ends the same...
Your greedy hands roaming every inch,
Your eyes all over me,
And the endless 'lessons' that I will never learn...
I can't remember when it all started,
I honestly can't remember life before it all began...
My childhood was ripped away from me at an early age,
Blissful recollections tend to slip by without my noticing...
And when I want to reflect on something good,
There is nothing...
There is only...you, the monster...
Everything links back to you,
A smell, a name, a touch...
I can never seem to get away from you,
And these horrid memories...
My days have been dragging,
I feel so dreadfully lonely,
I smile less...
But I still wear my own mask of deception...
I feel it coming,
Drawing ever nearer...
Dark...cold...depression...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-02-10 15:34:49]
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:49:02 PM AEST
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such tragic depiction in what can only be
called a work of art, i can feel your plea in
each word along with your pain, be that as it
may, your writting is par excelance, i love your
style . . . sorry 4 your pain . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:55:58 PM AEST
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I would bathe and keep you within the light of the moon, if it could hold the demons of depression at bay. There would be no further need for a mask and you could finally throw it away.
Steph, I have yet to read something from you that doesn't drag me right outta where I thought I was headin' and spin me about with a renewed focus and compelling thoughts.
Nazmythian ~
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:11:20 PM AEST
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No..don't go there.. don't go into that tunnel.. I will tell you an elephant joke.. why did the elephant run home at five o'clock? because he wasn't allowed to out afterdark.. with all the other elephants...grrrrrrrr.
Now wasn't that funny???? |
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:15:07 PM AEST
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A poem that is hard to read, but yet holds you
for every word. An excellently written poem
that forces the reader to empathize with the
person depicted in your poem. I liked how you
said that the mask of deception was adhered
to your face that was some cool imagery as
well as very poetic.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:43:51 AM AEST
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your write speaks to me like no other.you put so much in this write it truely amaze me.
take care . |
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Re: Mask of Deception
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:04:45 AM AEST
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This should never have happened to you Steph. You were an innocent child. A monster is what he is to have hurt you so deeply. I want to hold you in my arms. I feel your pain it is immense.
A powerful heartfelt write
Praying things get better for you my friend
lots of love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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