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Contributed by
opusmind
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:11:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I m a boy who can enjoy invisibility!
I am sleeping
Lying my heart on your breast
Dreaming the dream of comfort and rest
Slowly N’ softly you wave your fingers
Through my hair
All of my worries and headache is vanished
And I feel you so near
Then you whispered in my ears
‘Sweetheart' open your eyes and see what I see’
Smile came on my face and I said
I am the boy who can enjoy invisibility!
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Re: Rest
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by desireemiote on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:22:50 AM AEST
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| im getting the idea that you used the wrong word possibly? did you mean imprecievability or something like that. |
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Re: Rest
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:36:39 AM AEST
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I love the lightness of this. It truly feels like a beautiful dream does. Bravo! Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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