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A Monologue of a Broken Love
Contributed by
dyann
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I said that I’d take care of you,
You tried to say it too.
I said that I’d be right here,
You said the same thing with a fear.
I said that I’d support you,
You just said thank you.
I said that I’d give you everything,
You said you’d want nothing.
I said that I’m gonna share,
You said anything would be fair.
I said that I’d love you forever,
You said nothing because you loved her.
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dyann
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2005-02-10 06:32:47]
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Re: A Monologue of a Broken Love
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:53:11 AM AEST
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*let's out deep sigh*
Now this is an effective write. Cuts right to the heart of the matter and does so without being brash. Nice stuff.
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Re: A Monologue of a Broken Love
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:20:56 PM AEST
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excellent peice of writting, from a place deeper than the heart, the soul, your point not
only made, but well stated . . .
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