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I Will Remember
Contributed by
_smelly_oranges_
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:27:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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today is a day i will always remember
the day our country would not surrender
it was the day we said goodbye
precious tears dropped from our eyes
remembering that day that had gone so fast
and in our hearts you will forever last
we pray to God,"why did you have to go"
because we really loved you so
prayers were said and flags raised high
honoring those we loved who had died
"united we stand!",our country said
"God bless america",sung again and again
on september 11th we were attacked
and withen seconds the towers callapsed
we know this terrorist attack was very wrong
but no matter what america will forever be strong
many were lost but will always be loved
praying that thier in heaven with our God above
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2005-02-10 04:27:56]
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Re: I Will Remember
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:41:18 AM AEST
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you are an exelent wrighter feelingsa so strong i am very happy you posted this poem you can really tell you have a passion for writing and you are ver exelent at it
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Re: I Will Remember
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:24:54 PM AEST
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| Nicely done, thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. |
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Re: I Will Remember
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:00:09 AM AEST
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you really do have a knack for this style. I might like to see you write something more freeform but just in general post more stuff on here. Never give up your writing.
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