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To My Father
Contributed by
catz77
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:52:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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my dad in which i love so much
you've made a big impact in my life
you're no longer close to me physically
but you're here right now mentally
I miss you so
soon we will see each other again
this i'm sure you know
the family wishes you home
i only have one fear
that your face will not be shown
this will make me shed a tear
but i will always love you
and i know you love me too
your children are waiting upon your return
so soon dad come
i know this is what you'll choose
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catz77
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2005-02-10 03:52:33]
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Re: To My Father
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:16:19 AM AEST
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| this poem is nicly written and shows very much love and missing... |
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Re: To My Father
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:27:36 AM AEST
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| Tender and beautifully written poem, so much love and in a easy to read rythem and flow, excellent poem. |
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Re: To My Father
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:17:50 PM AEST
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| This was a very beautiful write, awesome job. |
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Re: To My Father
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by Archie on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:26:47 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me of the love I have for my dad. He died a long time ago but his wisdom and love still impact my heart. Thanks for sharing. |
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