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SINGLE BREATH
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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love is what i felt for you!
love is what i gave to you!
love is what i made to you!
then with a single breath you took my dreams away
all the plans we made with a single breath you took it all away!
I tried to do my best!
i tried to do it right
you cant say i didnt try!
then with a single breath you took my dreams away!
all the plans we made with a single breath you took it all away!
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aprilrose
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2005-02-10 01:27:32]
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Re: SINGLE BREATH
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:33:34 AM AEST
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| great write..you expressed this well... |
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Re: SINGLE BREATH
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:36:06 AM AEST
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| Som uch feelings woven into your words, but sorry and loss being the main emotions, deep words and an excellent poem. |
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Re: SINGLE BREATH
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:37:12 AM AEST
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love like a spoiled child eventualy gets it's own way, but still we embrace it, a lovely peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: SINGLE BREATH
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by _smelly_oranges_ on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:56:22 AM AEST
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| i love it |
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Re: SINGLE BREATH
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:10:30 PM AEST
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Good writing, good expression.
I guess all good things have a bad side too.
Great write,
Welcome to YPDC.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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