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Steph
Contributed by
tin
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You've soothed my anger,
A task i thought only blood could do.
When i see only red,
You make me see blue.
We've been together for a whle,
But it was never official.
We've been together so long,
Though it wasn't traditional.
Then i gave you a rose,
And you said you'd be mine.
How long will this last?
We'll both know in time.
But i've got a feeling,
A feeling deep and true.
That as long as we draw breath,
We'll never be thru.
Copyright ©
tin
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2005-02-09 23:34:28]
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Re: Steph
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by jjones12 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:43:43 PM AEST
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Great write!
=Jen= |
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Re: Steph
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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AWWWWWWWWW!!
nice write
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Re: Steph
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:05:40 AM AEST
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Aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww, Another heavenly beautifull write.
luv each-n-every word.
emy
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Re: Steph
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:53:28 PM AEST
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Awww beautiful!
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Re: Steph
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by crazygirl on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:06:08 PM AEST
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| Im not gonna lie it made me cry, but because it was beautifull. I feel that everyone should get the chance to feel this way about someone, and have it returned. Dont waste it, trust me it comes back to you |
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