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Serum
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:18:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
ThankYouPoems
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My tongue rent apart
The liquid dropped down into my hands
It sunk back into the heart
I vomitted
My face still in strands
And you are there
After I searched peice by peice
I never felt solace
And your sight didn't help to ease
This imaginative dream
Realized gratuitous grief
Everything opened
(so far)
Purposes
All feeling so brief
But your...
Simple, shy
Words...
Solved every lie
And I...
Scared away
My fears...
So you would stay
So long
To the odium
That held my mind
Far gone
Is the grudge
That strained my time
You are
Reason enough
To let it all go
A star
Shining bright
Where nothing glows
(pitiful how everything
slowed down as I erased
my hope into a fallacy
butchering out the lace)
But your...
Soft, brown eyes
Saw...
Through all the lies
And I...
Am sorry to say
That I...
Feared the change
What held me together
Clawed me apart
Eviscerating myself
Without command
Plunging the fuel
Straight to the heart
You stopped this
As you embraced my hand
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2005-02-09 23:18:26]
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Re: Serum
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by desireemiote on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:26:32 PM AEST
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is this meant to be a song? it's so catchy I almost found myself singing it without knowing any notes to go with it.
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Re: Serum
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:50:11 PM AEST
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AAAAAAaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww, this is sad yet awesomely sweet.
U best get 2 feeling better really soon.
a masterpeice!
huggs, luv, smiles, faith, hope, cheers,
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Re: Serum
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by CrimsonOrgazm on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:31:21 AM AEST
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i love it.. i can tell you obviously care very much for this person =) , and i'm sure she feels the same way..
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