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Ashes
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:57:04 PM in AEST
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A symbol on my forehead
A prayer within my heart
A sign for all the sheep He led
A place for Lent to start
You wore a crown of thorns for me
And I, a cross for you
You died to let my soul be free
And through my faith in you, it grew
From dust we were created
From the very earth we came
To the Fall we were fated
Paradise is ours to reclaim
These ashes on my forehead
Cleanse me, who was flawed
And tell you, who for me was bled,
How much I love you, God.
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Re: Ashes
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:44:03 PM AEST
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| El dios es muerto |
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Re: Ashes
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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It is beautiful. It doesn't come off as your first attempt. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
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Re: Ashes
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by WhiteDove47 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:12:38 PM AEST
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| What a great writing you did ! The words you used made my heart jump for joy for the Lord ! Thanks. |
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Re: Ashes
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:27:37 PM AEST
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This is a correction to afterdark's spanish comment.
El dios es no muerto. |
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Re: Ashes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:35:48 AM AEST
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Very nicely done, darlin. I had them stupid ashes on my head in primary school, walked around with a bit one my cheek for the rest of the day too... and nobody told me *pouts* lol
Hugs 'n Love
S'meee
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Re: Ashes
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:10:11 PM AEST
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I found this beautiful and inspiring. Keep this up, to be sure.
Andrew |
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Re: Ashes
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt sweetie:) hugs n' remember i loves ya nessa xxx
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Re: Ashes
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by freckle on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 07:33:36 PM AEST
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What a sweet poem. It is simple, like faith is supposed to be. Great job!!
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