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Refraction of Blood
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:09:01 PM in AEST
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Refraction of Blood
The mirror twists reflections
And wrong impressions
You are seen
As you want to be
Nonexistent
Perfection is refracted
And misconception is contracted
I'm blinded unable to see
What the mirror has twisted
In my appearance
Because I see with my mind's eye
And perspective can be contradicted
The truth is never seen
It's believed by the ignorant
But what you see are the lies
And all of your pathetic tries
Twisted to what you want them to be
Never again seen
But because of that fact
Perfection is never refracted
As blood seeps through the cracks
Of the shattered reflection
But correct impression
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essentially9
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2005-02-09 21:09:01]
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Re: Refraction of Blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:12:42 PM AEST
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| You and I both like wriitng about mirrors I think..This was very good and the overall feel was so great to get into..Your one of the best kitten..There is very few that can compete here at all.. |
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Re: Refraction of Blood
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by Compton-tre-block on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:24:50 PM AEST
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LOVED IT..
GRUESOME,TUNG TWISTIN,AND WEIRD |
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Re: Refraction of Blood
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by Compton-tre-block on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:24:52 PM AEST
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LOVED IT..
GRUESOME,TUNG TWISTIN,AND WEIRD |
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Re: Refraction of Blood
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:37:10 PM AEST
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Well Patricks got It right..
Cause i know I can't compeat
Your great Jinnifer
Clark |
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Re: Refraction of Blood
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:01:30 PM AEST
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| I loved this write,damn girl,you're good!! |
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Re: Refraction of Blood
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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| This was an exciting, heart-wrenching poem. Felt twisted by the words. Good job! |
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