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At Home On My Moonbeam
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:28:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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At home,
on my moonbeam,
the pain of life is gone.
The tears we've wept,
vanish,
from our lined faces.
All are cherished,
for what they are,
not who they will be.
At home,
on my moonbeam,
we can dance all night.
We can gorge ourselves,
and still have room,
and not gain an ounce.
All are loved,
the old and young,
the same.
At home,
on my moonbeam.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-02-09 20:28:24]
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Re: At Home On My Moonbeam
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:26:06 PM AEST
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| AAWW I feel for you I know this pain! Christina |
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Re: At Home On My Moonbeam
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by feathercut on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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| some of ur stuff warms me up like remembering books that were read to me or that i read as a child.... a very homey feeling.... i understand that poetry might be a great escape for you and thats good but keep your feet on the ground, look around you, and than paint your landscapes, but do take risks.... thats what expression and poetry is about..... say all that you want to say.... even if it isnt very colorful.... try to be more introspective...... keep writing, youve painted some nice pictures along the way.... |
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