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Perception
Contributed by
butterflygirl49036
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sweaty bodies thrown together
Arms and legs entwined
Heaving chests
Quivering thighs
Head thrown back
Eyes closed tight
Mouth agape
A scream erupts
It's quickly silenced
As mouth covers mouth
Blood freely flowing
Spark of life does fade
Shining blade falls one last time
Even death can sound erotic
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Re: Perception
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:27:22 PM AEST
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woah!!!! this is dark...but i LOVE it.....great poem and i love the last line "even death can sound erotic"..........
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Re: Perception
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:06:41 PM AEST
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Spark of life does fade
Shining blade falls one last time
Even death can sound erotic
overall not bad...i like how the beginning went...when you first start to read, other thoughts come to mind *cough*...but then you get to the second part and it comes clear...nicely written...
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