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Good-Bye
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can' take much more
I see no open doors
I'm ready to die
It's not like anyone is going to cry
How are they going to miss me
When they don't even see me
I could fall dead now
and no one would care to no why or how
The world is full of fakes
Who just give and take
Well now I'm taking my life
Good-Bye
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heartbroken4ever
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2005-02-09 20:16:24]
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Re: Good-Bye
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:21:04 PM AEST
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this is very sad...and how im feelin right now...i love this piece youve done a terrific job...u really have.
all the best
xxxooxooxoxox |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:46:47 PM AEST
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You know I would cry and miss you Amber...
And You know I don't fake around....
Clark |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:53:17 PM AEST
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I like it...And you should read a couple of mine.Also if you need some1 to talk to PM...im always here.
BabyFacedAngel2010 |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Mandy2007 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:54:54 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love this poem!!! It's full of exactally how i feel, you should check out some of my poems too! |
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