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Death Of A Classmate
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:05:24 PM in AEST
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goodbyepoetry
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Hearing so much mourning all around,
Some fall to the ground
Others hug and give support.
I only knew a familure name
She died in the hospital after that game
Now without her this place isnt the same
All was quiet when i arrived at school
Not everyone knew
A most popular girl, only 17
Is now gone, and never again will be seen
Now everyones found out
Most cried and shout
Hearing the cries of pain
I hear what some people are saying
They say they dont care
And wish they were'nt there
So dissrespectful at the death of a classmate
Half the students leave
They cannot take the pain
The rest sit crying in the halls
hardley any go to class
All the school in a depression
Those not upset by this death have no soul
THis doesnt feel real
Like some kinda of dream
You can awake with a scream
I dont know why i cried
For someone i didnt know
The pain and depression in the school took control
Ilegal prayer used to start class
Talking about the girl, the good times, the laughs
How she is now free from this pain
I will remember her
That she died today
A most populare girl, Ashley Yetzer
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by willow_tara72002 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:07:52 PM AEST
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| This should be under the Grief/Tragedy section but. i accidentaly posted in the wrong one |
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by Phantomdream on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:24:38 PM AEST
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| I had this happen, but he was a close friend, and he was only 14. That was two October's ago. This is so sad... |
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:39:39 PM AEST
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| wow...i cried when i read this..becuase this happened a year ago at our school...a 16 girl in my year died in a car accident...and youve described everything that happened so well...and i didnt know her very well either and the girl was popular too..but she was nice. im soo sorry..this is sad and really hit a nerve with me...if u have time could you read my poem "Dear Amy", along the same lines of yours. |
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:07:19 PM AEST
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| So very sad this was it touched me! I know this pain when I was going to school I saw it happen so much! Christina |
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by Petznick on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:04:55 PM AEST
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WOW, very good imagery and expression of emotion. i've never seen this happen so i can't even begin to understand the pain but you're poem got much of it across
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Re: Death Of A Classmate
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by Trisha on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 01:09:05 AM AEST
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| Nices Poem Well Writen |
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