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Ghost
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:22:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The entity.
Alone and cold he waits.
The sun rising and setting,
- day by day.
Awaiting,
He wants a place.
Anywhere but here.
A sign or sense of direction,
He pleads.
His soul wisps away,
Like a mist dissolving
- beside the morning dew.
And he is taken away.
Into the moonlight he rises.
His shadow residing forever there.
To a place of new revelation,
He dissapears.
Copyright ©
xfrozenwindx
... [
2005-02-09 18:22:12]
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Re: Ghost
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by xPureEcstacy_Ashx on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. I loved it.
~Ash |
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Re: Ghost
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:48:20 PM AEST
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| The concept is not bad and the subject is good..But it does lack something here..I of course would have liked more to go on here.And a a bit more darkness to it..It was not dark at all..Overall it was good..But here my comments are hated or loved..The diffrence is on this site..I am the only honest person here..For good or for bad.. |
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Re: Ghost
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:29:40 PM AEST
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| Creepy...But in a good way! It is too good to be something you "just wrote". That was really REALLY good. |
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Re: Ghost
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:02:13 PM AEST
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| I like this as afterdark said though add to it I would like to see more of this |
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