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Love
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you were mine
I had everything but time.
Your heart was like fire
that was all I desired.
Now your long gone
cause I treated you so wrong.
I want you back
for you are what I lack.
I need your love
for it is as pure as a dove.
Copyright ©
heartbroken4ever
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2005-02-09 18:20:04]
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Re: Love
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by breny on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:25:56 PM AEST
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i think this is a great poem. short and to the point. good job :-D
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Re: Love
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:50:09 PM AEST
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I hate this poem amber, Not because Its bad, But because who your writting to, He Has no love as pure as dove.....
Clark
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