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Dark Haiku
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:15:00 PM in AEST
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Drips with arrogance.
Judges with stale lifeless tones.
Man who knows little.
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2005-02-09 17:15:00]
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Re: Dark Haiku
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:32:21 PM AEST
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| You forgot God complex |
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Re: Dark Haiku
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by GingerB on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:42:51 PM AEST
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Interesting haiku.
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Re: Dark Haiku
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:35:45 PM AEST
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| Loved your haiku! Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Dark Haiku
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:43:42 PM AEST
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You also forgot.. stuffy, unassuming, bumbling
careless, politically appointed oafs-
Though I don't think the above would've fit into the scheme and discipline of a haiku-
A great one though
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