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A thousand words said in three...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:11:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cherishing your kiss,
A thousand words said in three...
"I love you..." sweet bliss...
Warm in your embrace,
Perfect strangers, yet still one...
Soulmates united...
A sweet melodie,
This hymn of love we sing...
Let it never end...
A lush mystery,
This surreal, beautiful dream...
Let it be endless...
Wish there were more words,
To describe this, what we have...
But there is just one...
Flawless...Gorgeous, love...
Making me breathless again,
Every time we touch...
Bittersweet caress...
And oh, the look in your eyes,
When we make love...
How I love those eyes,
Drowning in a sea of green...
Leaving me breathless...
My world went crazy,
I didn't know where I'd be...
Until you walked in...
Reunited friends,
Becoming perfect lovers...
Ah, douce amour...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-02-09 17:11:51]
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:55:38 PM AEST
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I step away ... only for a moment and return to find you have answered the challenge call. What a way to answer as well.
My favorite ...
"Flawless...Gorgeous, love...
Making me breathless again,
Every time we touch..."
Tthink that says it all ...
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:58:07 PM AEST
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Yes, it is *very* sweet. Again, absolutely perfect for the season (though that wasn't a requirement)! Great job and is noted on chart.
*Whew!* Getting hard to keep up with you all! :-)
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:46:08 PM AEST
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I dont know how you do this its awesome!
Michelle |
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:57:32 PM AEST
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"A lush mystery,
This surreal, beautiful dream...
Let it be endless..."
I am smiling now. True thanks.
This was wonderful. I think I'm liking Haikus more after reading this . . . |
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:10:41 PM AEST
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amazing work,
pix xx |
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Re: A thousand words said in three...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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| Absolutely gorgeous write. |
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