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Moment In Time
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you could freeze a moment in time,
What would it be, I know what’d be mine
It would be when Mark first said those 3 words,
Before to my heart is had been unheard.
I will never get that precious moment back,
Although now in love I do not lack,
It was special a moment to be framed in gold,
A moment that will never die or become old.
To finally hear the words you awaited,
To finally have your love orally consummated,
Is the most amazing gift in the entire world,
Knowing that you finally want me to be your girl.
I wish I could turn back to hear the words again,
As those 3 words hold power to take away your pain,
When I reminisce I begin to smile,
As waiting for your words was more than worthwhile.
You done something on that precious day,
Something that won’t ever fade away,
You welcomed me with open arms,
Into your heart forever protected from all harms.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-09 12:25:24]
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Re: Moment In Time
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:35:07 PM AEST
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This write would make any one smile.
Very well done..
luv, huggs, smiles, peace,
emy |
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Re: Moment In Time
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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This has to be one of my absolutestly favoritest poems from you Pixie chic. I love it when you get to feeling so positive with your words. Much pleasure sent your way that you have found Mark, and he can make you feel this way. Kudos.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Moment In Time
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:31:00 PM AEST
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Awww, Krissie, this is so sweet.
I'm so glad you and Mark have each other.
Such a beautiful poem..
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Moment In Time
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 03:10:32 PM AEST
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| good, great job my friend and super hero pixilator.. |
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Re: Moment In Time
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:37:48 AM AEST
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| Ah sweet love, something of which is beyond me, but still it is good to see others finding such true and deep meaning within theirs live, beautiful poem. |
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