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A Girl
Contributed by
xXxFaygoFetishxXx
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:59:31 AM in AEST
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She is just a shell
Of who she used to be
A hollow girl
That no one can see
Torn into pieces
No more tears to shed
Now nothing is left
She is already dead
Her eyes are cold
And she breathes despair
Her heart is broken
And nobody cares
A smothered soul
That no one knows
A girl forgotten long ago
Copyright ©
xXxFaygoFetishxXx
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2005-02-09 00:59:31]
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Re: A Girl
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:15:36 AM AEST
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FORGOTTEN?HOW??IF THIS IS THE SAME GIRL WHO WROTE THIS,SOMEBODY HAS GOT TO TAKE NOTICE OF THIS WONDERFUL & GIFTED WRITER!!!A TRUE HEART CAN BE HEARD EVEN IN SILENCE!!!!
SO LISTEN UP & TAKE ON THE WORLD.....
AFTER ALL THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!!!!
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Re: A Girl
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by karmen on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:39:09 AM AEST
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i like it... it flows good till the end... good write tho
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Re: A Girl
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:59:32 AM AEST
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very deep and emotional write
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Re: A Girl
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:55:31 AM AEST
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Great write..I'd listen to Dan if I were you..
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Re: A Girl
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:42:37 PM AEST
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very good write...i loved it the whole way through. not very long, but you made it worth reading. nice flow & form. Good use of words, wonderful rhyming. keep it up...
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