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Product of a Broken Home
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Product of a Broken Home
My face,
Have you seen?
No you have'nt
You don't know this face
That wants an early grave
A failure I'm deamed
Where ever to go
I trust no one
Being they don't know me
Dark secrets kept
From everybody to see
A product of a broken home
This is where I've slept
Every day I roam
Wipping each tear I've wept
And I can't go on
No reason to try
No where to go
I can't see clear
Bleeding from my eyes
Blinded from these tears
That I've cried
My house is too far from here
This is where I'll die
Never to move another inch
Taking my own life
Was a cinch
~....... ~
~I'm a product of a Broken Home~
As I open the front door
I'm never welcomed
Home.
Because nobody lives here
And I am
Once again
Forever Alone
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-08 22:52:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Product of a Broken Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST (User
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clark babe you really need someone to love
you if your this alone you do. I love this poem its how i feel most days here in this house.Just remember i'm here and not going any where
much love
amber |
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Re: Product of a Broken Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:47:55 PM AEST (User
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this made me think of my own home. i still dont know what to think of it. your ending was spendid. reminds me of three days grace, home. |
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Re: Product of a Broken Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:58:37 PM AEST (User
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I just love your writing, every poem I love more and more. Great write, its often..always..how I feel. You did a great job.
ly
--amanda-- |
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