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Plan [A]
Contributed by
daniel
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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and now you've seen all my affinities...
soon i will gain the flawfull virginity...
new plan is dropping on in
well doesn't he always?
and you should see the purposeful direction...
erased from whiteboards so you can
see absolutely nothing... oh yes.
maybe you'll see inside my head, you're better off dead
living in dead horizons won't be that healthy for you
don't think i am hopeless
i wear all the scars that you do
it's not utterly helpless
you'll see what i am gonna do
new plan is dropping on in...
new plan is dropping on in...
and while the changes come...
the rest is just left undone... but wait for the next thing
there's nothing you need to see, just love this liberty
of not knowing what's really going on inside this skull
don't think i am hopeless
i wear all the scars that you do
it's not utterly helpless
you'll see what i am gonna do
new plan is dropping on in...
new plan is dropping on in...
i've waited for it drop right in my lap
sold inside the thought of me
sold inside the thought of me
new plan is dropping
new plan is dropping on in
on in...
Copyright ©
daniel
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2002-12-10 18:30:00]
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Re: Plan [A]
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by Jessica_Saini on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 08:16:15 PM AEST
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| Sometimes isn't it annoying when you are trying to write something, but inspiration for a poem comes instead? that happens to me once in a while. I was trying to write a paper for a french class when the inspiration for "Je t'aime mon amour" came to me. And a few times in a writing class I took last year, two poems about writers blocks came to me when I was trying to write journal entries. At any rate, your poem was interesting. |
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Re: Plan [A]
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:55:14 PM AEST
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I'm still trying to understand it, Danny....
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Re: Plan [A]
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:33:22 PM AEST
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Awesome. Took me a moment, but I gots it! And I totally understand, I was trying to write a math test today, and instead I wrote a poem, Heart's Desires. Yuppers. Poems take us at the weirdest moments. You'd think it was our subconscience, yes?
I love the poem. I like to read your poems, they are refreshing!
YS |
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