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The Journey of Poetry
Contributed by
dream_protector_bp
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:27:42 PM in AEST
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The Journey of Poetry
In a flash.
Crystallized droplets form and fall from the heavens, onto the land.
This divine rain falls suddenly,
Boldly proclaiming its presence,
With the aid of thunder and lightning flashes,
To add effect.
It awakens emotions and ideas,
With every crystal drop, that falls
You become entranced.
With words expressing beauty that can not be matched
You are moved by the way the words flow,
In a chorus that proclaims life
You are brought to near-tears.
You feel as if you are there,
As if this is all happening to you,
Or someone you know.
It becomes personal.
You must see how it ends,
So you continue the journey
Continue to walk through this rain,
Until the final stanza.
The final part,
The most important of all.
And when it finishes,
The journey is ended,
And the words have stopped their motion
And you sit their stunned
In shock for a moment
With wide, open eyes
In a kind of amazed daze over what you've read.
Amazed at how easily it began,
And how beautifully it ended.
Then, you pick up the paper;
Take a look around,
And begin the journey again
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dream_protector_bp
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2005-02-08 21:27:42]
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Re: The Journey of Poetry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:11:55 PM AEST
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| Beautifully done, and I love the sporatic spaces, they add great effect to the mood of the poem. Good ending too, most important part of anything written. |
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Re: The Journey of Poetry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:40:14 AM AEST
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| Wow...This is an amazing write. You dissected a poem so perfectly. I definately love this poem. The strucure and the imagery was just excellent. Great work! Keep it up! :-) |
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Re: The Journey of Poetry
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:29:32 AM AEST
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Yes, that is the transportation of well-written and fascinating verse that leaves one breathless. Bravo. Nice stuff here.
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