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Beneath thy love
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:09:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cast my nets over the water of thy lips.
Over the water of thy lips
I cast my nets
And they are set free.
I spill the moon in my sleep
In my sleep I spill the moon.
The moon is paled in thy presence.
In thy presence the moon is paled
and I sleep.
I catch the night in my hair
In my hair I catch the night
The night is the brightest star
cast away by thy light.
I take thy love.
Thy love I take
across thy fingers seam,
thy slender fingers
stitch and seam.
Thy love I take
Against the fire of thy breast
Thy breast against the fire
of the sea
I take thy love
and the sea is lost
beneath thy love.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2005-02-08 19:09:41]
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Re: Beneath thy love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:23:16 PM AEST
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| Very pretty, and a much different style than is usually seen around here. Nice write! |
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Re: Beneath thy love
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by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:35:12 PM AEST
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| great read i like your work good job |
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